First Chapter Audit

Sharpen your hook. Strengthen your voice. Stop second-guessing your start.

You’re writing a story that matters—but you’re stuck wondering if the first chapter is strong enough to carry it.

You’ve got words on the page. Maybe even a full draft. But deep down, you’re questioning if your opening is doing your story justice.

You’re not looking for fluffy praise. You want honest, professional feedback that will actually help you grow. You want to feel confident your story is moving in the right direction—and you don’t want to waste time rewriting the same first five pages again and again.

I see you.

You’re sitting on a chapter that you’ve rewritten more times than you can count. You toggle between perfectionism and procrastination, unsure if it’s “good enough” to move on. You crave clarity—but every time you try to revise, you spiral into overthinking.

You want someone to tell you the truth—kindly, clearly, and constructively. You want to know what’s working, what’s falling flat, and how to fix it.

Here’s how that might be showing up:

You keep tweaking your first few pages instead of moving forward.
You feel like your opening isn’t “grabbing” enough, but you don’t know how to fix it.
You’re afraid of wasting time going down the wrong path.
You’ve lost sight of your voice because you’ve been trying to “get it right.”
You’ve stalled—again—and are starting to lose confidence.

It’s time to shift. Time to get real. Time to move forward.

Introducing the First Chapter Audit

A powerful mini-review designed to give you clarity, direction, and confidence—so you can stop stalling and start finishing.

This is a professional, no-fluff, personalized feedback session focused on the first 2,500–3,000 words of your manuscript (typically 1 chapter).

I’ll give you the kind of tough-love, high-level edit that shows you what’s actually working, what’s not, and how to move forward—without losing your voice in the process.

This is for the woman who…

✔️ Knows her story matters but feels stuck rewriting the same opening

✔️ Wants professional eyes on her chapter before she keeps going

✔️ Is tired of writing in a vacuum and wants grounded, helpful critique

✔️ Feels ready to take her book seriously

✔️ Craves both direction and encouragement—from someone who gets it

Here’s what’s included inside your audit:

🖋️ A detailed editorial letter (PDF) outlining strengths, gaps, and next steps

🖋️ In-line feedback and comments directly on your chapter (via Google Docs)

🖋️ Tailored recommendations for next steps to improve pacing, flow, and voice

Here’s what you’ll walk away with:

💡 Tangible insight on what’s working and what’s not

📍 Clear next steps—so you can revise with intention

🕊️ Renewed confidence in your story, your voice, and your message

🔥 Motivation to write forward—without spinning your wheels

🙏 Peace of mind that you’re not doing this alone

Investment: $197

Clarity, confidence, and momentum—for less than a single coaching session.

✨ This is your story. Let’s make sure it starts strong. ✨